Maybe I'm using the word 'style' incorrectly, then. I do appreciate a variation on style, but it's like... say you've just watched the most beautiful movie in the world, and then turn on 'Bones' on television or something. It's still very enjoyable, but something feels clunky.
There, that's a word I wanted. It's a good story, but something in the word use or telling feels clunky and less sleek than his usual writing.
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Date: 2007-11-18 04:20 am (UTC)There, that's a word I wanted. It's a good story, but something in the word use or telling feels clunky and less sleek than his usual writing.