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2007-11-16 02:24 pm (UTC)
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I feel like you took on someone else's style here (Matt says 'Amazing Stores'?) and I don't like it. Not that it's someone else's style, but that it's not anywhere as good as your own.
However, the story itself, the ideas, are stunning.
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However, the story itself, the ideas, are stunning.